Thief N.o 6

I (smeiled) smiled to myself, "This is easy!"

The world around me felt like (have been pause) it had paused. There (were) was no light, no animals around, no human beings - only the moonlight was accompanying me.

Fishing in my bag, I took out a rope and threw it over the nearest tree.
Feeling (confidence) confident, I climbed up the ladder and jumped across (to) through the opened window.

The darkness fell around me (,) as there was (even) no silver moonlight here! Putting on my special glasses, I looked around the room ... only to (find) hear a voice whispering (at) into my ear, "What are you looking for?Young Lady?"

Mrs Chien: This scene was well described. Not only can we see the triumphant and reckless robber, we can also sense his deep surprise.