Nervous and worried, I waited for the marathon to start. "Bang !" the shot exploded from the black starter pistol. The marathon began in earnest. Three thousand people started running at the same time. I darted as fast as a lizard and kept my hopes high.
In my mind,voices chimed in my head, shouting, "Go! Go! Go! You can do it!" After what seemed like an hour, I saw the one mile sign. Beads of perspiration dripped down my face and I heaved a sigh of relief.
Mrs Chien: I see the scene and hear all the exciting sounds. Excellent transformation of writing with effective choice of words and great application of strategies taught.
This means your mind is extremely flexible if Sheryl allows it to.
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