Everyone kept silent as the Discipline Mistress walked into the hall she was holding Fauzia's hand in her hand.She dragged Fauzia to the front of the hall.Her eyes looked very serious.Then,she took the mike and said ,"We have found the culprit of the person that tried to burn the toilet".Then she took out a cane from behind her back ,a table was dragged to the front of the hall.Fauzia stood forward and as the Discipline Mistress raised her cane i closed my eyes.........
By Hong Wei
Everyone kept silent as the Discipline Mistress walked into the hall. She was holding Fauzia's hand and dragged her to the front of the hall.
Her eyes looked very serious ( she took the mike) and taking the microphone, she said harshly, "We have found the culprit who tried to burn the toilet". Slowly, she took out a cane from behind her back while a table was dragged to the front of the hall.
Fauzia stood forward and as the Discipline Mistress raised her cane I closed my eyes.........
Mrs Chien: Successful description that allows us to see the action on stage.
Try to create smooth movement in between sentences.
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