Bully 1

The big bully walked into the class of 35 pupils and started shouting at the students (,).
( he said,)
' Whoever wants protection from me, has to pay me a fee of $20 a week!'

Everyone was afraid (1) of him as he was the most notorious (2) student in our entire school! (He went to a gang fight with 50 of his gang members at the void deck of Toh Yi Drive Blk 123 . he and his gang members took metal poles and some even took out Parangs' and went there to fight!!!! So now everyone is afraid of him. Even the biggest , largest and the scary looking Jordan was afraid of him!!!!)

Mrs Chien: How would someone scary look like? And how do you know when people are afraid?

For example: (2)
Even Jordan, the biggest bully in class dared not look at him. Strangely, I could hear the tick-tocking of the wall clock or was it coming from my own heart?
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